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arsillyd
 Post subject: feel the light^^
PostPosted: March 15th, 2009, 4:09 am 
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hi there^^ this is officialy my first post here on the NDA art critique messageboard. I wanted to share this little thing with you

http://arsillyd.deviantart.com/art/Gift ... -112337383

I hope you like it, but constructive critism is more than welcome!! ^^ tell me what you think!!

(also sorry for the bad saving in jpeg... was to lazy to change it back to png, so sorry for the blurr :D) :weird:
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Dragon
 Post subject: Re: feel the light^^
PostPosted: March 15th, 2009, 5:26 am 
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Your shading is wonderful - but the tail does not seem to follow the light direction and source that you have put down. There is also not as much structure on the right eye and brow, but other than that, the colors are good and it is a very interesting composition.

(I don't want to talk about the feathery-things because I don't know if they are just body protrusions or feathers...)


Anyway...welcome to NDA! x3

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ArtFox21
 Post subject: Re: feel the light^^
PostPosted: March 15th, 2009, 6:41 am 
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I love this one, The shading and colors are viewtiful.

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Fyrefantasy
 Post subject: Re: feel the light^^
PostPosted: March 15th, 2009, 9:58 am 
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Beautifully done! :amused:

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