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hi, I´m new here and I´m from Germany (are there any others from our country?)
And please don´t get a terrible, because i´m from Germany, I´m nice =)

I know j. Neondragon Peffer, I´ve got two books of her
and I love Drawing, so I wanted to post some of my pictures, some with the method of Neondragon, some with my own method
(please tell me if you don´t understand me)

that is one of my first dragons with neons method
(I hope, the picture is here)

on this picture, I am very proud
it is the cover for my folder of my notes


some other pictures, I will post soon

Very nice work, I adore the second picture! Welcome to the forums!

thank you
the second one is younger, the first was my first dragon xD

here is some other


that is a friesian horse

and i have a question, what time is it at your country?

Wow - that horse is amazing, wonderful work on the anatomy, and that shading is incredible! You must have had a reference for that? Either that or you have some seriously good knowledge of horse anatomy Your first dragon pic, that was my first dragon too! I really like the second one, you are obviously very good at drawing poses for your dragons - how long have you been drawing? Also, do you have a deviant art page? {The time at my end is around 1hour behind yours, I live at GMT :P

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i love the horse brilliant shading!

Gutten Abend xMayrax! I used to live in Wiesbaden, and Heidelberg before that. Willkommen! You have an excellent command of shading, especially if that horse is done in charcoal. Very well done. The poses of the dragons in the second pic are a little cartoonish...which is cool if that's how you roll. If you want them to look a little more on the realistic side though, you should probably take a look at the anatomy references in the Tutorials thread here. Very helpful stuff in that one!
Great work so far!

I adore your attention to detail on the horse, I love fresians. They are so pretty. =)

thanks you all
I´m happy
I love Friesians too, they are so beautiful *rave* ^^

I draw since last christmas (2008)
I have also drawed (?) such things before, but they looked very terrible xD
horses I don´t draw so long like dragons. I have tried it some weeks before and it was a good drawing
here it is:


I show you some more dragons
that is the Lindwurm (I don´t know it in english ^^) drawed with introductions


that dragon I have found in the internet and I had to sign it


these dragons are drawed with coolie


and this is the christmas-present for my grandma




I don´t like drawing with colors, my favourite is the pencil (most of my pictures are with pencil)

you dont happen to have a deviant art account? cause your arts awsome, i'm spellfiretidecaller on DA

I haven´t thought about that and I think, this is an english homepage too?
and sorry, but what is a spellfiretidecaller?