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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 23rd, 2010, 10:03 pm 
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Yes, Faustulus steps into the story just as Sil is leaving. It's a good trade-off, believe me. I know he's not the same, but you'll like Faustulus. I hope.

Yeaaaah! I wasn't expecting it so soon either - at least not when I first started writing the comic. But after a while of drawing that horse body it's coming as kind of a relief. It's not like I'm killing him off or anything. We haven't seen the last of him - he'll just be out of the picture for a while. Maybe I'll make some kind of exclusive minicomic explaining what he's up to after leaving Torin with a Kirsaian.

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 24th, 2010, 12:28 pm 
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Cool. Have you updated the comic yet?

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 24th, 2010, 3:31 pm 
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The comic updates every Sunday. :3 The update is usually up between 8 PM Saturday and 7 AM Sunday (PST). But it's always up by sometime on Sunday.

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 24th, 2010, 6:58 pm 
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Ok! Great!

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 28th, 2010, 11:41 pm 
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Lovely new picture up for the vote incentive! Take a look. Not bad for a few hours in the afternoon (it seemed awfully urgent at the time!).

In other news, for those who read the comic, the page this weekend will likely come late Sunday or early Monday. I have the page done, of course, but I'll be gone all weekend. So expect that a little later! Next weekend updates will resume as normal.

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 29th, 2010, 4:44 pm 
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I love the picture! It really implies Torin's lonelyness. Although his right leg does look some what awkward. I know that's how the joint should work, but it still looks strange. Probably just me though. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 29th, 2010, 5:11 pm 
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I think it looks possible, but perhaps a bit uncomfortable. I used myself as a reference, but I'm female and I don't know if men/boys normally spread their legs that far. So now that I look at it, I'd say it's accurate, but maybe uncomfortable. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: July 30th, 2010, 12:19 pm 
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I don't know too much about how guys sit either cause I'm a girl as well. But I was refering to the "ankle" joint and how the foot sticks up. It seems like it might hurt to rest your foot like that, but then again I'm a plantigrade, not a digitgrade like Torin. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
PostPosted: August 4th, 2010, 9:57 am 
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Ohhhh the ankle I thought you were talking about the leg in general. I actually referenced that pose by trying to sit like that, and it's possible - though it might be hard to hold for a while. Hmmmm....

Anyway, I have a non-WiF picture for a change of pace. It's Insidioso, who's loosely based off one of my MapleStory characters. But as an original character, he's a thief notorious for being a pretty bad guy. He can use both daggers and throwing knives in battle, depending on how far away his enemies are (though he has to keep his wristbrace on to use his right hand effectively).

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 Post subject: Re: Atomi's thread of ridiculous art (...and I want critique!)
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Not bad. Umm, have you updated the story this week? You have the new chapter title up but no page. Was that all you were going to do this week? I clueless! lol

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