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So, as the title so despairingly says, my newest creation involves birds...that's just plain bad news since I can't draw animals of any kind . Fortunately, they are neither big, nor are they the focal point....probably my only saving point

So anyways, here it is. Critique and comments are welcome as always!

http://darkauras.deviantart.com/art/Mur ... -123712212

Very nice work! Although, to help you out a bit with the birds, the biggest problem is the wings. They sweep too much. There is no obvious joint at the top of the wing. If you fix that, the birds will look much better. Just a note for next time. (Check out some bird reference photos)

I see what you mean...I made the actual wings themselves curve too much... *goes off to study bird anatomy*

I like it. =D You're pretty good with digital art.