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Dragon · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 6:18 pm

Okay. Ignore the morbid attempt at perspective, ignore the background (The gargoyle has the right idea) but just look at the dragon. Actually, its a quicksketch of one or two minutes of the Phantom when he is cursing Christine for abandoning him...but it failed.

Can someone help me get his anatomy straight? Please..? D:

-depressed-

I can see every single mistake but I know not how to correct them...

Fyrefantasy · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 6:20 pm

I'd try to help you if I could, but I can't see the image (I'm using a mac, so that might be the problem). Perhaps you could post a link?
edit: hit the refresh button and it popped up as it should be.

Dragon · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 6:23 pm

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t111/Storm_dragon_2007/-sob-.jpg :c Usually I throw pictures like this out, but for some reason it is nagging me D:

Fyrefantasy · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 6:46 pm

I redlined this for you. I dunno if it's any better than what you had anatomy wise though...
I hope it helps! :amused:

I added rough wing outlines because the pose the dragon is in might be more realistic if there were wings outstretched to balance the dragon.

Dragon · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 6:56 pm

Thank you. :3

Fyrefantasy · **Posted:** March 14th, 2009, 10:13 pm

You're welcome. :amused:

saberdragon · **Posted:** March 24th, 2009, 11:33 am

Wow. That's really cool. I've never actually tried to draw a gargoyle before. I think i'll try it now. heh heh.

ZmanArt007 · **Posted:** March 24th, 2009, 5:50 pm

saberdragon wrote:

I've never actually tried to draw a gargoyle before. I think i'll try it now. heh heh.

Ya, neither have I. looks good with fyrefantasy's redlines.

DrawingDragon · **Posted:** March 24th, 2009, 9:58 pm

The only thing that looks a bit strange is that the arms are skinny. Other than that, I think it looks great.

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