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Wew, I haven't been here for ages! I guess no one still knows me, sooooo... I'll introduce myself again (yay!)
Hey I'm Mo I'm a girl the end. =3

This is the WIP of Lyra, a demon with split personalities. Everything that comes to your mind is welcome, just don't be overly rude!

I think she looks pretty cool!

I really like her outfit, tail, and feet, they all look very nice ^^

However, there a few problems I notice in the area of the face and the arms that could use some work.

For the arms, the position her arms are in, is not a very relaxed and comfortable pose that much (I tried it and my arms hurt a bit). I think it would be nicer for her to have her arms in a more relaxed pose such as this http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2763/448 ... de61f8.jpg and http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2438/390 ... 7d6c72.jpg
In my eyes, it feels better and looks better.

As for the head, the eyes don't seem to be on the same plane with one eye being higher than the other. I would just put the position of the eye to be on the same plane as the other as I have done in this red-line.
Other then that, this looks great!

Hope I helped a bit

Why thank you!



Thank you for your help (and compliments), I really appreciate it! I didn't try the arms myself (well, I did after you pointed it out XD) and you're right, it's not very comfortable. So thank you for your suggestion there!
Also, those striped things are not her eyes, but her brows. Her eyes are on the same plane, but I see now I made one brow a lot bigger than the other one. Thank you for pointing out, I'll fix that!

Ah, I see.
I'm glad I could help!