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I am in desperate need of redlines right now, I'm drawing this picture for a friend and I can't seem to get the anatomy right. Her character is a breakdancer and my ref (also attatched) is wearing pretty baggy clothes so I have no idea where some of the basic forms of his body are... For example, his torso is ridiculously long from my perspective, but I could be wrong. Anyone willing to help?... Please?

It looks good so far. :]

The reason why the torso looks a tad long - the guy in the photo might be wearing his jeans low? (below the hips, gah, whyyyyy do people do that), try bringing the hips further up the torso in your picture?

*fails at critique*