NDA Art Critique Message Boards

I am incredibly proud of this work so far, Comments and crits welcome,

And you should be proud of this work. its well done. But to me her right arm (our left) seem a tad to big. This is what i mean.



It isnt the best example but i hope you know what i mean.

P.S Don't ask why it's Obama's wife lol it was the only one i could find in that sort or arm pose. lol

This is looking really good so far :3 I love the expression on her face, and the way you've drawn her torso is really nice too. My only suggestion is that her hips are very small in porportion and her head a little large.



I hope you don't mind me red-lining this, but seeing as you said crits are welcome? I hope it helps some how anyway.
I'm really looking forward to seeing this image progress ^^

yes i agree her hips are too small, i've been fighting between trying to get the side angle proportions right and getting them Big enough which keeps me second guessing myself, i'll use your bluelines for ref(i know they're always called redlines but i got a weird wrokin brain)

Looks good so far, though I think her left breast, our right, is smaller than the other. I like her tattoos though^^

lol what do you know it is a bit smaller,
didn't notice that, but i dont think im gonna fix it cuz if your not really looking you don't notice, and it looks good as is, and in reality they're always is one thats bigger than the other.
i had the most fun with the tatoo's . reminds me of neon's really old work back in 2002/03(ive been haing around this site for a long time i just realized), or kinda like some of the tatoo's in .Hack//sign's charcters

ITS ALIVE
lol yeah decided to work on this lil thing again

It's looking good so far! The colours of the hair and clothes and so on contrast nicely with the blue sky!

I don't know what all your plans are for the colouring of this image, so forgive me if I mention anything you already had in mind, but uh...! Some more colour variation in the sky would look nice since the sky is never really one solid colour, but a gradient with the deepest blues being directly above us and then it gradually fades into paler blues as it reaches the horizon...! I'd also darken the shading on the girl a bit since it's currently a bit difficult to see any of the shading in some areas. Using some blue shadows (because of the blue sky) might also make her sort of uh... fit into the background more as well.

I hope that helps and it will be interesting seeing the progress you make with the image!