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Update. Yeah that was quick but I want to get this done. lol I like it anyway. Maybe I'm not too bad at humans!



C&C are appreciated!!

The finished piece - http://fav.me/d3cewl2

Comments welcomed.

I really like it ^^ Just a little advice, try to use more shadings...it gives more life to a drawing I believe :o

My scanner makes the drawings really light. I do put a good amount of shading but when I scan it, it looks flat! And when I take a picture of it, it's really dark! Does someone know how to solve this problem??

Maybe play with your scanner's options? Or you could mix media (like combine pencils and digital work) if you have any software (like photoshop) and do the shading directly on your computer...or use different methods to shade...like the colour wheel (ex: to shade something made of yellow, use purple Oo...it makes the contrast more precise). It is something you can do with colour pencils.

Hmm... I have to work at that. Sometimes I do the contrast thing, but to me it doesn't seem to flow as well... But that's just me I'm sure.

MAPLESTORYYYYYYY *high fives*

Its maybe a weird thing to specifically find, but I really like the sitting characters left hand on the ground. I think it might be the faint castshadow you gave it that really makes it seem like its... grounded, for lack of a better word, haha.

lol Thanks. You play Maplestory?

Not so much anymore. Just occasionally when I'm home from school. What server are you on?

Yellonde - everyone that plays in my family is on here, atomic soldier is too. She was the one who invited us.