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I made the legs come higher, and changed her halberd. If you see anything else that I should change please say so.



So, fire away!

Edit: I'll make the fur to look better when I ink the pic.

I think with the arms, they don't look right... At the shoulder should be the widest, as it goes down to the elbow it should narrow a bit, then after the elbow it should be a little wide and then narrow down to the wrist. Same goes for the legs...

I agree with Sangyne, the arms do look a bit off, but it's looking great overall! :D

Hey great work ^^ What I prefer the most is the head^^and tail^^and outfit :D But I also agree with Sangyne...it needs...a little bit more curves? in the arms, to suggest bones and muscles.

Yeah, the arms and legs are the hardest thing for me... But I hope to get better!

I'm Done!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I'm really happy how it came out! Her name is Shyama Agon-dray, which means 'dark dragon'.



C&C are welcome!

You look great! XD The arms would still need a little bit more muscle, but oh well. I really love the fur on the tail and the spear/scythe/weapon!

Thanks!

My new WIP! I kind of wanted to show a few of the differences between Western and Eastern dragons. Any help of it would be very nice, 'specially on the Wester.

That's a really cool idea!

Though one of the most identifying features of an Asian dragon is their serpentine body. I see that you've made the body longer than usual here, but for it to look like an Asian dragon, you'll have to make it much, much longer. The legs look too much like a Western dragon's as well; they should be more lizard-like instead of mammalian.

Here's a tutorial all about Asian dragons:
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... ed#/d8ik7z