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Ok, thanks a lot!

Ok, I made the Eastern longer. Haven't changed the Western much though.



Help would be appreciated.

Update!

I think I'm done with the Eastern, but if any of you see any mistakes on please say. I changed the position of the Western's body, but I liked the head so I kept that.



C&C are welcomed!

The lineart is done! Yay!



Hmm... I need some colors for the Eastern. Anyone have any ideas? C&C are welcome.

Oh my, I just adore that Eastern :3

The western is great too

Thanks! I like how the Eastern came out too.

It's already been inked, but I wish I could have crtiqued sooner >.< School is getting in mah way.

This would have been aVERY good chance to practice on "Structured Scales" For a Dragon, the scales follow a rythmatic set, they stay in line and move with the muscles. I suggest practicing with scales next time, try to see what kind of Scale design would look best. ^^ In all, very nice, and I think blue would fit your Eastern ^^ some blues and greens.

I think a blue would look nice.

I really didn't like drawing the scales, but on every Eastern I saw there where scales! So I made them. And yes, if I do another draogn with scales, I will try to make them look right.

And I don't start school for another two or three weeks! (I'm homeschooled! )

Here's the finished piece.



I'm still doing free requests if anyone would like me to draw something for them. (Just please not humans )

I drew these a few days ago. They're the heads of my younger siblings as dragons. The top two are girls, and the bottom is my youngest brother. Their names are: Aysu, Sule, and Uaithne (from top to bottom).