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It's been WAY too long since I was on here.

One day I started drawing a Jolteon. I wanted it to battle a honchkrow, but since i can't draw that one very well anymore, it's all alone on a white page. I want to do more to it, but I would like advice on where to go next?

http://elventigress.deviantart.com/#/d2w130d

Notes to go along with it:
1. This is a photo of it taken by my cell phone. I left the flashdrive with the scanned file at my parent's but I took a picture to ask my friend for advice. So I'm using that file until I can get the scanned one up. Therefore there are a lot of details blurred by the poor quality.... like the pupil/eye.

2. I know the tail needs work. I though the angle would make it work but it really doesn't... so if anything I want advice on how to at least fix that up.

So yeah. Please help me?

It's really, very good! I also think the tail could use some work. The neck 'fur?' could use a bit more electrified look to it. The tail I think should, too. I think the back leg looks a bit weird, but (I'm sorry) I don't know how to help you with it. And looking at a jolteon card, I think the ears should be bigger.

I hope this helps you!

Hmm... I would take away the line (hah, I don't know what else to call it) around his mouth, and also perhaps make the eye a bit more circular, and perhaps a bit less shading/highlighting on the eye (might be the quality of the pic, though). The tail looks a bit odd too. But other than those things, the Jolteon looks awesome :D I especially like the pose he's in!