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Hi hi. I am working on representing both of my Pathfinder characters based on DnD 2nd edition: Counsil of the Wyrms campaing. I am playing a blackdragon (from Pathfinder, Paizo editions) and its kindred, a summoner gnome with its serpentine-like eidolon with improved claws :D. Red lines are always welcome even though I am far from finished with this picture.

Well, all I can really say is, I think his feet are too flat. The fin on the back of his head also should be slanted higher and thinner, so it looks more like it on the back of his head and not the side.

Alright, I'll see what I can do with the fin, I agree with you ^^; But for the paws...I will really need redlines cause I have no clue how to draw them Oo On the official pathfinder picture they kinda look very flat...but I agree that it looks weird anyway. Thanks for your advices.

A very small update...

I just wanted to say that I really love his face haha it's very well drawn and he looks kind of sweet.
I like the pose too, cant wait to see it finished!

Thanks ^^

An other update.

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__"__"__ That is extremely smooth lineart! Did you free hand that, or use the pen tool?

lol, I am using a bamboo pad, all the lineart is made with photoshop.

Need some help with back leg and front...paw please ^^;