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Hello people ive been busy with finding work and enjoying the holidays and then the new year came and whoops it jsut went so fast with real life giving me all this stuff to do.

Ive been working on many many things Art, Writing, jobs, studies and travel with family.
From ARTSY comes this piece that is still in process and, as always, open for suggestions and comments from you all.

(Just hoping it will be since there have been so many wiews but not actual comments )

Let's see... I'm not sure how your doing this, but I really like the smooth face. Although, I think his muzzle should be facing toward us a bit more, or his right eye shouldn't be able to be seen that much. I don't think I'll be able to help you much with the chain mail, but I think you're doing good.

Thanks a lot Ill try either of those things. And yes the chainmail... its actually jsut filler for now! XD

So everything else doesnt seem tos tand out? :P

I don't see anything. Just soften the fur on the neck and ears. And maybe the hair.

Thanks

BTW. ive got an update already! Ive never worked this fast :P

Major update on the picture. I am currently struggling with the hair and the fur! :D

It all seems so lifeless for some reason

AAAaaaand another Update.

Please if theres something note.... i can clearly feel something is a miss. Though i cant understand what

It looks wrong because sticking a wolf head on a human body just doesn't work, at least, not unless you do it carefully. a

The shading is good, but it needs some work on the head. It's too flat. So, I made this and I hope it helps.



Also, practice using circles and boxes for other creatures and people. And use them to study animals and people in photos.

Well it is an Athromorpic being. An Anthro werewolf at that :P



Hmmm this seems detailed AND interesting. Thanks a ton...

Boxes and round shapes as guide? Yup seen thsi before... many times in fact, yet i barely use em :S Hmmm

Gosh my referance seemed to be WAY off XD I must have just picked bad photo :P
Well its charseet. So just smiling i guess for emotion.
I think the size differances are right, jsut that perspectives might be tad off... and let me tell you something, using REFs is STILL huge problem.

It takes lot out of me to supress and blow away my "youre cheaaaaating" side :S I know i might get more thigns correct if i devoted mroe time to learning the thign anatomy... :S