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jadedragen · **Joined:** March 18th, 2009, 5:28 pm **Posts:** 4

im trying to keep my interest in drawing lately , i find myself doing less and less of it.
im so used to the look of my drawings that i find myself not noticing mistakes in anatomy, ect, ect...

it looks too one sided to me, and im not sure if i want the wings to be transparent or opaque(deciding weather to keep the hind leg or not)
http://fc92.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/ ... dragen.jpg

Siveran · **Joined:** March 11th, 2009, 5:13 pm **Posts:** 94

Ooh, I like it. Maybe you could define and enlarge the ribcage and pelvis, make the leg larger, and shorten the upper wing arm on the wing facing us. It looks good anyways, that's just my opinion of what could improve it.

Heh, I love the twisty horns.

Ryujin · **Posted:** March 19th, 2009, 4:04 pm

looking good! one thing i noticed: his right horn(so the one on our left) looks like it spirals, but the other horn just sort of zigzags back and forth, without actually twisting. on the bright side, this should be easy to fix. :happy:

flo · **Joined:** March 19th, 2009, 4:01 am **Posts:** 278

(My dragon's wings are always opaque, cuz I'm someone lazy)

jadedragen · **Joined:** March 18th, 2009, 5:28 pm **Posts:** 4

well here's an updated version

http://fc79.deviantart.com/fs42/f/2009/ ... dragen.jpg

i changed the wing
erased and redrew one of the horns
added a few details and did the shading

when i ran it through the scanner it became somewhat flat, so i think i may still have to work on shading some more so it looks more like what i see in person

flo · **Joined:** March 19th, 2009, 4:01 am **Posts:** 278

Great job!!!!!!!!!!! :amused:

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