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Wow. Just. Wow.

Done :3.

Very, very good. To me, it almost looks like a picture.

Very very nice! ^^ You should do more of these, its very good!

Thanks a lot! :3

Here's what I'm working on now:



I like working on grey.. Somehow it's a lot less tiring for my eyes to focus on a grey drawing for a long while.

Very nice! I would make the arms a wee tiny bit longer though, they're a little short, in comparison to the body. The legs feel stocky too but not as much.

I elongated the torso purposely, which is probably why the arms look shorter than they should be. Does it look very off (like does it bother you) or not?

I think that because both of the arms are bent, they seem shorter as well. It's really up to you, you're talking to someone who abuses tiny arms.

Tried fixing some things, mostly the legs, arms and hands. Also trying to "block in" highlights and shadows.



Yes, it will be coloured eventually. I'm just trying to get the values down right first.

I think it looks good, especially with the longer torso ^^ Give it a less human character to it. Very nice, yet again Lhune!