NDA Art Critique Message Boards

Wow, I like that speedpaint and all the pretty colors 8D.

How long did it take?

For the most recent one....I have no clue how to respond to that. Its not that great? What? I couldn't dream of drawing/painting like that. I'm assuming this was done on the computer?

For the centaur one before the one of the face:

This one the neck and shoulder area is off. The line of symmetry on the torso should match that of the neck. Like, the center of the neck where it meets the torso, it has the same line of symmetry. That way the farthest side of the shoulder area isn't longer than the closer one.
Also, maybe its just the way I draw, but maybe the boobs (or, at least the one) should jut out from the side if you're looking at a 3/4 view. Also I think they're a bit low. Again, probably just me. Also, where's the fourth leg?

EDIT: Thanks Zman. Didn't know that :/

not that great!!!!! that's just amazing

You're very good @_@ I love the speedpaint, it'd make a good background for you dryad race actually... for some shamanly type methinks. You also draw noses super well.

My only crit is for the dryad species. You may want to consider making the waist(or whatever that area is where the forelegs of the horse pops up) thinner than the legs themselves.
http://www.equestrianwales.org.uk/images/Trellech%20Horse%20Show.jpg plus female humans tend to have pretty thin waists compared to their hips.

Hope this helps!

That was A speed Paint!

Thanks, guys! :D

And @ DrawingDragon, the speedpaint took about an hour and a half.


Aaaaand another image!



Whilst being totally frustrated with lineless rendering on an image I'm trying to do, I just decided to take a break and have some fun... and the result is a portrait... that I did linelessly.... that happened to be super easy, and I don't know WHY things work when I don't want them to, and don't work when I do. xD

Trying to work on rendering form better, too; I think I'm getting better, though. Probably my best portrait to date... I should really do one with a reference. >_>

Very NIce, but is he kind of smiling to one side. Because his lips are slighlty skewed, and by jaw both sides are not the same, but if he was smiling to one side it would explain it. It is still very good though.

Great portrait! MY only suggestions would to add more small highlights and make the cranium a liiiittle larger. :)

Oh wow, I like all these pictures. The speedpaint one is very good, too. I hope I can learn vegetation like that. =D