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So I am working on an okami, photomanip, and i don't know what i should do about the fire and the light from it. Also any other help would be appreciated!

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff267/leafeon_ex/okamizunecopy.jpg

I think it looks good. It's Amaterasu! I love that game.

thats awsome so far and the fire looks great as it is. But if thats fire on the ground next to her (sorry if im wrong ive only read about the game and i want to play it badly >.<) it should be more bright, but i guess you were already going to do that anyway so yeah lol. Cant wait till its finshed.

I love this so far! Looking forward to seeing the finished product.

There are a few things I would point out though. I've done a quick edit of the picture to show you.

(1) The fire would be casting some light on the wolf's fur.

(2) You could make more of a yellow transition around the fire to make it fit into the picture a bit better :]

(3) The fire probably wouldn't cast as much yellow light as you have done on the floor. For example, if you have a fire in your fireplace, it doesn't make a strong yellow glow on the wall opposite - more of a soft glow.
If this picture was at night, the light would be more obvious, but since it is daytime I would suggest toning the light down a bit.

(4) The shadow of the wolf could be lightened a little bit - the fire would shed some light over it.

Hope this helped! :}

Ok, thanks! I'll work on it.