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This is an art trade with someone on DA.

I don't know, for some reason when I looked at the person's character I couldn't help but think of Niarei being eaten or torn apart.

What do you think? I'm gonna make the arms bigger, but that leg behind the arm isn't sitting right with me, but it was worse when it was in front.

Update.

Oh, my.... Good drawing though! I can't see anything wrong with it!

Looking great, keep fixing, keep updating and drawing and itll sure be a success

PS. The thights may look bit small when they connect with the body, you might want to consider looking into them.

(some) flat colors. If you guys are interested, here is the ref I'm working off of, too. http://sunmoondragoness.deviantart.com/ ... -131821508

Wish me luck with coloring this beast.

Good luck x3

My approach this time is to be minimal with shadows, but I may be contradicting myself.

Well less distinctive shadows are ok when full day, but if theyre TOO light it would seems his muscles and such are either small or blended into the skin. Other than that, looks nice.

I am satisfied with the colors now, just need to jog to the end.

Ooooh. I see a slight change in style there :3. That is if you don't stop how you started. It looks lovely and horribly shiny and delicious! <3 Keep it up Toni :3.