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 Post subject: Crayon's Scribblings (critique encouraged)
PostPosted: August 17th, 2009, 6:53 pm 
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Ohoho... see what I did thar? A little play-on-words of my most popular and frequently used web-surfing username...

Anywho, I used to frequent this place nearly everyday, back when it got revived several months ago... and for some reason, my visitings randomly dwindled. Which really should not be the case, as this place is chock full of such wonderful people and super wonderful critics!

Thus, in an effort to restore my attendance, I'll start dumping my sporadic sketches here. Critiques and red-lines are henceforth welcomed, and the occasional greeting and friendly chat will be aggressively glomped and loved. :3

I'm obnoxiously friendly and polite, so you needn't fear my occasional bouts of craziness. XD

Assorted stuff from the last few days- ShinXchange, scrapped burfday present, sticker design...
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Enjoy! Don't let the scribbly lines burn your eyes! XD


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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: August 18th, 2009, 12:51 pm 
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Aww, I absolutely adore the first dragon. :P

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: August 18th, 2009, 1:56 pm 
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LOL! In that case, that makes two of us. The phrase "Too nice" has occasionally been used in conjunction with my name. The first dragon is really full of character, the pose is great! The second is a little confusing at first, but the overall look is really good! The tail angles might need to be softened just a hair, but otherwise I don't see any problems with the anatomy. Any chance we could see them in color? Pwetty pweeze? :amused:

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: August 21st, 2009, 2:37 pm 
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Cullen: Thank you!

GuardianAngel1: I already warned you about the messiness of my scribbly sketches. XD And I agree- the tail is looking a little to angle-y... I have since worked on it a bit more, and softened a lot of curves by quite a bit. Now I'm just stuck on the paws (I HATE paws D: ).

UPDATE: Here's the solids for the sticker design. I'll still add highlights and the like, but since I already put this up on photobucket to share with other friends, I thought I might as well put it up here, too. :-) Meant to be a birthday present for one of my good friends who unfortunately got sick the entire week of her birthday (but at least it gave me extra time to finish XD)

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: September 16th, 2009, 4:16 pm 
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Keep meaning to ask you; what program do you use?

Also, ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!!<3

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: September 16th, 2009, 10:44 pm 
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i really like the second one. And the pose on the third one is great too :amused:

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: September 28th, 2009, 8:54 pm 
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Thus, in an effort to restore my attendance, I'll start dumping my sporadic sketches here


... that was said August 17, 2009.

... it is now a month later.

FAIL

But in my defense, school has started up, and I barely have time to eat cupcakes, let alone draw. Yes, that's right. Cupcakes outweigh art. I know where my priorities lie. XD

POSTY NUMBAH ONE: clicky A sketch dump of most of the doodles done in class over the summer and the first day of school for the fall. Since I never got around to posting it, this will actually be added to with some more doodles of my dragons as soon as I become un-lazy enough to scan them. Laziness = FAIL

POSTY NUMBAH TWO:
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... because I love my Merle. XD She's a little blue fox whose design I purchased from a wonderful artist on DA because she needed the money. As a result, I started really getting into canine doodling, and I love drawing Merle whenever I get the chance. :-)

POSTY NUMBAH THREE: clicky Since it seemed like the cool thing to do was to draw original characters in poke-garb and stick 'em with a team, I randomly started doodling an epic scene one night. Never really got around to finishing it, but I hope I do someday. I came very close to adding a Glaceon, but in the end, I didn't want to be parted with any of the pokemon I already had. WHY ISN'T ABSOL AN ICE POKEMON!? Doesn't it look like it'd make an awesome ice pokemon? Anywho, the chic in the center is Wanderer... and yes, she has a random tail. Not for any particular reason... just because in her development, I felt like giving her one. Now she has one. *shrug*

POSTY NUMBAH FOUR: clicky New DA ID that, like everything else, I haven't finished yet. Picture was one I took while at Disneyland this May (I live, like, 20 minutes away), and while reviewing photos, I realized that it didn't look like the great statue of Mickey right in front of the castle had a tail. And I pictured Wanderer staring at it in confusion (the irony being that SHE had a tail and Mickey didn't)... and then, because Wanderer could never be without her counterpart, I had to stick my dragon, Dax, in there too, in some ridiculous getup. In this case, the infamous ears. And the object he's staring at so joyfully is a churro cart. He's a notorious sugar fiend, doncha know.

POSTY NUMBAH FIVE:
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Merle's actual markings. Was my first drawing of her after I bought her design, so excuse the anatomical mess. Don't ask where the other front leg went, either. XD It's on vacation.

POSTY NUMBAH SIX:
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'Nother Merle doodle I did in all of five minutes while watching "My Big Fat Greek Wedding" last week in lieu of studying for my Japanese exam tomorrow.

POSTY NUMBAH SEVEN:
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My dear friend Mirzers also bought a fox design during the same auction, and decided to name him Jasper. He really is cute as all hell, and I had been meaning to doodle him sometime (since she is constantly doodling Merle for me, the little moron XD). The sketches in blue are Merle (really really rough, then lightened and detailed, as shown above), and the ones in tan are Jasper. Again, will likely be cleaned up and finished whenever I feel like it.

POSTY NUMBAH EIGHT:
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Traditionally, I've always drawn things for my friend Kelli's birthday, but they've traditionally failed. Epically. But this year, after discovering all the fun things Staples has to offer, I'm attempting to draw a handful of her characters to be made into magnets. She loves things to hang on her wall, and I thought having customized refrigerator magnets would make her squee. So these are UBER ROUGH sketches of what I'm aiming for. Upper left is Widget, right is the awesome pair of Salamandas, Won and Ton, and bottom is her ever charming Kaluh.

POSTY NUMBAH NINE:
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My oh-so-long overdue half of a trade with my darling Rekky of her manly beast, King. Again, super super rough, but my plan will be to have his day-glo green markings and details glow in a super dark environment, so it'll all end up looking cool (hopefully). TESTING OUT RANDOM LIGHTING FTW!

You may be wondering why I'm bothering to show my super sexy sketches that are only sexy in a god-we're-so-faskin-ugly-that-we're-going-to-pretend-to-be-sexy way. Well... just wanted to prove that I'm really not the greatest artist out there. EVERYTHING I DO STARTS OFF THIS UGLY! XD Then I scribble and scribble and scribble some more on top of the ugliness until I find something I like, and then poof, it turns semi-okay.

Moral of the story- SEE KIDS! IF I CAN MAKE UGLINESS LOOK PRETTY, THEN SO CAN YOU!

I'm always hearing people say, "Wow, I wish I could draw like you" or something to that affect, most always toward my ever-talented friends (and occasionally to me, which just makes my brain explode). But really, it's not impossible. It's not improbable. It's not even... well, I hesitate to say "difficult" or "hard", because the work it takes to gain any amount of skill is certainly not easy, but once you get yourself into a mindset of drawing for fun and the enjoying of learning and gaining experience, I can't really describe it as hard, either. It's just labor-intensive. And time-consuming. And doesn't happen overnight. But can most certainly happen to anyone with the patience and desire to go for it.

*assumes cheezy thumbs up pose* GO FOR IT!

[/shameless self-confidence plug]

As always, helpful comments and red lines are always appreciated!


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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: September 29th, 2009, 1:44 am 
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i like the looks of the number nine so far. cant wait till its finished! :amused:

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: October 4th, 2009, 10:05 am 
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I love the poses! They look so real.... and furry!

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 Post subject: Re: Crayon's Scribblings
PostPosted: October 4th, 2009, 4:28 pm 
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Wow, these look great!! Keep up the fantastic work!

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