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 Post subject: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 16th, 2010, 2:06 am 
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Something I've been working on. I'd like some help with the anatomy, please. X) The feet/legs are what are bothering me the most. But certainly, if there are other errors, please mention it, haha.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v512/Aven/wip.jpg


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 16th, 2010, 3:47 pm 
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This looks great :)

And can't critique on it now - I have to do homework, sorry. But I'm sure that other people will!

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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 17th, 2010, 9:38 am 
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Thank you. X)
I'm thinking on making this piece be rather misty, or perhaps have glowing moss growing on those rocks. ^^


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 21st, 2010, 8:28 pm 
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Hmm...for the background, it would depend on what type of feeling you want to give it. The mist would work well if you wanted to give the pic a mysterious feeling. It would be good for a mountain or low 'canyon-ish' setting.
The purple moss would be nice in a dark or cave setting.
I don't know, but for some reason I always imagine the rocks a red colour.

As for anatomy, I can't really find anything wrong.

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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 29th, 2010, 8:11 pm 
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I decided to go with a mountainous region. :)

This is an update of the image.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v512/ ... wip3-1.jpg


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 29th, 2010, 11:54 pm 
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I like the alien green outline!

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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 30th, 2010, 1:45 am 
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Ah, hehe, that isn't staying. Not sure what colors I'll be doing.
Oh, whoops, just realized I forgot his belly line. X) I'll edit that later.


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 30th, 2010, 10:10 am 
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Okay, so here's what I did last night. I made his hand smaller cuz it seemed rather big. I added color. Also, I changed the line color and edited the rocks some.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v512/ ... wip4-1.jpg
He's too bright for the background, I'll darken him later. I still have yet to erase the wings behind the front ones where they are covered by his back.
Question though, is the background too dark for you guys?


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: May 30th, 2010, 5:47 pm 
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One thing to remember, is that rock does not build up in stacks, except in specific climate conditions (Coastal stacks, desert mountains {he would be huge :P}) So, it is either a stack of rocks or an artificial pile - I'd go with stack of rocks, as that is easier - I've given an example of what I mean here. Now that we are decided it is either a stack or artificial, this makes the structure weaker - let's apply some Physics. The dragon is perched on the top of the rock, out over the curve. The Centre of Mass is the exact centre of the weight in any object -if you can find this point you can balance it perfectly.

On either side if this point is the base of the object, which may sometimes extend beyond the physical base of the object, providing there is a point higher up to balance it out. As the dragon climbs up the rock, it creates a "Moment", which is kind of like an action, or movement. The Line of Action of the weight is the force created by the movement applied to the base structure, i.e, the rock.

If the line of action of the weight is inside the base, then all is good. But if the line is outside, then the Moment becomes too strong and the base moves - the rock topples over.

To rectify this, you merely need to even out the stack slightly, or apply a balancing force such as a supporting stack, or something similar. It's a nice drawing so far though, I like it :)


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 Post subject: Re: Recent WIP -Redlines Please
PostPosted: June 1st, 2010, 4:25 pm 
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Ah, thank you so much. :D
I changed the rocks, is this better? They're sloppy, working on fixing them up.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v512/Aven/awwip6.jpg


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