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 Post subject: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 6th, 2011, 11:34 pm 
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I haven't been on here in ages.
Anyways, I thought I'd stop in so here's my current WIP.
Just a rough sketch so far.
Critiques are very much appreciated :)
http://kahnyri.deviantart.com/gallery/29978991#/d3i95n7


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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 7th, 2011, 8:18 am 
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He's so cute! But his faces is a bit to wedge/triangle shaped for me (but that's me!).

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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 8th, 2011, 7:22 pm 
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I made some progress on this: http://kahnyri.deviantart.com/gallery/29978991#/d3iej6e
I don't like the dragon's head much, I'll be fixing it eventually.
Please critique anything except for the dragon's head.

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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 8th, 2011, 8:26 pm 
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Awesome so far! Can't wait to see the finished product!

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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 9th, 2011, 4:00 pm 
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Nice job so far. I'm just wondering where the dragon's other hind leg is! Also, I could be wrong, but I think the dragon's shoulder blades might jut up more, just because of the way it's posed. I'm not sure though.

It's nice to see you're painting over a neautral tone for the background! I would advise blocking in all of your colours and large, basic tones first before getting into details and comlicated shading. However if the way you're colouring works for you, keep it up! You've done a nice job on the woman's face.


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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 10th, 2011, 4:37 pm 
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Thank you guys!
@Thunder: I'm not quite sure where the other leg is. That's definitely something I'm gonna have to fix sometime in the near future.
Also, I've experimented with different methods of painting and I find that if I focus in on one are before blocking out colors in other zones of the image I stay more focused and it works better for me.

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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 10th, 2011, 10:26 pm 
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Hey, looks great so far! But I just saw a little tiny detail...her left hand (the one on the right)...well...the thumb...it shouldnt be on that side of the hand...but other than that, I really love the face of the woman. Keep up the good work ^^


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 Post subject: Re: Engineered WIP
PostPosted: June 14th, 2011, 5:54 pm 
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Third WIP: http://kahnyri.deviantart.com/art/Engineered-WIP-3-213184149
@ Akerah: Thanks! I'll fix her hand at some point.

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