NDA Art Critique Message Boards

I didn't spend very long on this one, but I'd still like to know what you think:
http://inejwstine.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d3iglrj

Thanks!

I love the expression! Its adorable and happy and goofy, haha. It reminds me of a happily panting dog.

As for critique, hmmm... I think from this angle we'd be able to see the back of it's throat, though its difficult to say because that *could* be covered by the downward point of the front of the beak. It would just make the tongue look more like its coming from somewhere, y'know?

I hope that makes sense. Regardless, its a very cute drawing!

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! ^^
And that makes sense about the throat. Appreciate the input!