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Saltychickencrispy
 Post subject: Caterpillar 1
PostPosted: August 1st, 2011, 2:17 am 
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Caterpillar #1 in the caterpillar-ish scene that I'm working on. The anatomy is a little wonky. Any suggestions on how to fix it? :thinking: Help is greatly appreciated!

http://i1208.photobucket.com/albums/cc366/Saltychickencrispy/Caterpillar1.jpg

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 Post subject: Re: Caterpillar 1
PostPosted: August 1st, 2011, 7:21 pm 
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Its soooo cute! :amused:

Erm, I don't know much about caterpillar anatomy XD All I can suggest are some cross contour lines along the belly?
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