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Siveran
 Post subject: WIP Smoothie Dragon - Lineart Complete
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 12:17 am 
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I've been totally ignoring the new forums in terms of posting new art. So, here is a WIP of a spontaneous gift of someone's dragon with a mango smoothie--
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h116/ ... othie3.png
Sorry if it's a little large. If I make it smaller, the tiny slivers of lines disappear.

Critique is much appreciated, but I don't think I'm going to do any huge edits right now. :)

Update!
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h116/ ... othie4.png

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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 8:28 am 
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Oooh, that's awesome! Very crisp lines (so far), and you've got some realllly good muscle structure going on the wings there. And those hands are deliciously intricate. The markings are really cool, as well! 8D

Can't really find anything to critique; so just keep up the good work. *w*
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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 9:48 am 
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Very nice dragon! :amused:

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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 9:53 am 
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No need to edit it, I like it just the way it is :happy:
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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 10:16 am 
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/What everyone else said. 'slooking great so far. :3

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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 12:37 pm 
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That's PDA so far *Pretty Darn Awesome*.
I'm really liking the way it looks.
Not giving very productive feedback so I'll shush now... *steals smoothie and goes*

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Siveran
 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 7:55 pm 
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@Andan: I'm glad that the hands look okay. It's the first time I've drawn hands... HOLDING stuff. D= Horrors. Thanks!
@Fyre: Thanks!
@Flo: Nothing left to do except line it, I think.
@pargile: Thanks.
@Maiden: She'll eat you, instead, if you steal it from her. >:D

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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 20th, 2009, 10:50 pm 
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OMG! the hands are awesome!! they will have the nails eventually, right? I've never been able to get hands/claws to do anything... :sad:
nice markings and anatomy.

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 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 21st, 2009, 6:56 am 
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Yeah, add some talonage and you're on your way D-: !

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Siveran
 Post subject: Re: WIP Dragon with a Smoothie
PostPosted: March 21st, 2009, 4:52 pm 
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She doesn't have talons on her hands in every ref I can find, which is... odd. The back feet will have talons when I finish them, but I had to change their odd bendiness and bulkiness before adding them.

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