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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 15th, 2009, 4:20 pm 
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Oh man, I really love how you've colored the dragon so far. It's totally awesome, yush. I can't wait to see it finished. :-)

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 15th, 2009, 6:32 pm 
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I think he/she would look awesome with warm colors. :3 or blue. Turqiouse blue, but that is me haha. ^^

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 15th, 2009, 7:50 pm 
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Thanks guys <3 *hugs* I really appreciate it ^^
Sangyne, the character isn't mine, and she is all white ^^ I will be duplicating the dragon layer though and and messing with some other colours to make her more than in your face white XD Hopefully it'll work.

I've been told that the background contrasts the character way too much- do you guys think that it looks bad, or do you think it could be pulled off? Cause I really don't know where to go with the background any more.

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 15th, 2009, 8:30 pm 
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Hmm. I think it would be better if you made the mountain around the dragon be more greyish than it is now. It'll make the white dragon stand out more against it rather than blend into it, but it's more of an opinion than anything. :/

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 16th, 2009, 7:45 am 
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Very nice, detailed in nice simple fashion... but whats up with his (her?) Mouth? Looks like a,,, i dunno... "someone up to no good"?

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 16th, 2009, 11:41 am 
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It's done and can be found here: Deviantart Thanks to all who helped meh through this one XD

Grandoize: I made the mountains darker and hopefully she stands out now ^^ also put more detail in them, and I'm finally happy with it <3 thanks for the suggestion ^^

Anu: Cheers ^^ She's just supposed to be grinning mischeviously XD She's all like flying around her territory showing off I guess ^^'

On to the Kiriban I owe for Quisum over on DA ^^

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: December 16th, 2009, 4:21 pm 
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Awesome to hear that you've finished it. :D

The final picture is wonderful. <3

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Great Northen Dragon
PostPosted: January 1st, 2010, 2:26 pm 
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Thankies muchly Grandoize <3 ^^

I gots a new computer for Christmas so I can finially do some decent work. My old one was so crap that I'd draw a line and have to wait for it to appear >.< But this is a proper gaming/art computer and it makes me muchly happy XD AND! It has changing coloured lights O.O Pretty.

On to my new piece I guess. This is my half of a trade with Seraphania over on DA, and its of her character Story ^^
Such pretty colours XD

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I think the main issues for this is her left wing (the one furthest from the viewer)? Not sure what else to do with it though, so if no one has any ideas and Seraphania likes it and says its ok, I'll just go ahead and colour it. Also bothering me slightly is that back leg, but we'll see.
Also...........water D: Don't know how I'll tackle that, but we'll see once I get to it.

Comments, crits, red lines and paint overs are muchly apprecaited <3 Thanks for looking ^^

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Story
PostPosted: January 3rd, 2010, 8:43 am 
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Sorry bout the double post, but thought I'd through these in aswell, even though one is finished.

First is a piece I'm working on for Quisum on DA, who caught my 15k pageview.

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Will start colour soon.

And a revamp of an old character named Lucretia. Bout it really.

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On DA: Clicky?

EDIT: Are any of the pictures in my thread showing up for anyone? O.O

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 Post subject: Re: Flute's Art dump: Story
PostPosted: January 3rd, 2010, 9:58 am 
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I can see them fine ^^ They look really good! Can't wait to see progress on Story!

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