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 Post subject: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 21st, 2010, 10:38 pm 
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hey everyone! having a good week? :happy:

i wanted to see if anyone could kind of help me out on a pic i have.
its a pic of a wolf family, only a small beguining pack. its of Sotto and Misha.

i wanted to know if anyone had an idea of where to put their two pups. ive tried MANY different poses and places, but i cant quite get it. ( the pups are currently unnamed; one is larger than the other;one is male other is female btw )

comment if u have any possible ideas :-)


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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 21st, 2010, 10:43 pm 
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i would put them looking through the larger wolves legs as to hide from danger but know whats going on. Although i told i'm a weirdo so those are my 2 cents.

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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 21st, 2010, 11:04 pm 
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omg i didnt even think about that! ^^ thnks
hehe lol

k so lets see if anyone else has any other suggestions. but i think ima gonna go for your idea :)

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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 21st, 2010, 11:21 pm 
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Well i'm glad i was of help

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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 22nd, 2010, 10:03 am 
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You could have the larger pup with his front paws on the left wolf's hind quarters, so that it look like that one is looking at something with that caring look it's got going on :) and the smaller of the two could be sitting quietly between the two :)


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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 23rd, 2010, 12:10 am 
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awwww cute! :-)
i will defenetly use that pose for my next pack picture, for Kolan's family :)
i aprciate both of your ideas, and your time (for coming all the way ovr here to help me out)!! :yahoo:

I'll update the pic very soon :-)

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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 23rd, 2010, 12:18 am 
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Great work so far! I like the suggestions of where to put the pups, between the legs of the other two wolves seems like it wouldn't interrupt the flow of the picture. One slight adjustment you could make to the anatomy of the wolf in the foreground though, the neck is just slightly longer than what seems natural. There are two ways to fix this, you could either lower the head just slightly, or you could raise the chest by placing the front paws on a pedestal of sorts (like a boulder, or a naturally rising hill). That's just an observation, but the rest of the anatomy looks pretty good!

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 Post subject: Re: Wonderful Wolves
PostPosted: February 23rd, 2010, 10:33 am 
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thanks :amused:
ya, i did go little long with the neck. i wanted that wolf to be taller than the other, but i guess it does look a little funky lol
so, thanks for the suggestions! i think I will redo the pic cuz the pups didnt actually even fit anywhere! :gasp:
thanks again! :-)

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