NDA Art Critique Message Boards

For my Finished Artwork, go here!: http://www.neondragonart.com/mb/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=5654

Here I will post all my WIP's and Sketches, as well as some Speedpaints and Art Studies. Feel free to critique them as hard as you can! And don't worry about being too harsh, I can take it. x3


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#1 WIP:

(critiques are welcome, however I can't change anything about the lineart, as I have already inked it permanently)

They are very good!! They look very alike to real big cats. I like the shading alot, especially the eyes and the fur deatil on the middle cat. The one furthest down to the right, a lynx I think, looks like it's eyes are to wide open and the one furthest down to the left looks a little off, but that can be me. Overall great job and I think they'll look great colored too^^

Thanks so much Elflady!

Ah yes, the bottom left one has been bugging me -so bad-! It's anatomy is way off, and I'm tempted to some how change it, though I can't, haha xD

Looking great so far!
The only critque I can offer is about the wolves, the heads are a wee bit too big. Sorry, I don't have redlines. But you deffinatley show pottencial.

Thank you Gingerleaf!
Ah! And thank you for pointing that out! I didn't notice that I was making them too big until you told me. <3

Something else I'm working on, just for coloring/value practice.

Very nice! A little tip- Do not be afraid to go dark. I kinda noticed that you have more light than shadow on the dragon ^^ The eyes are beautiful <3

Ah! Thanks for pointing that out! <3

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Nothing much. Just a sketch of a certain star that won't go beyond this sketch. Reference used, though loosely, because I just needed to draw to ignore some annoying feelings I'm having. And, ahaha, this is like one of only times you will see human art from me.