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I'm doing an Art gift for a Friend of mine, She's more of a demon kind of person, but Loves Dragons as well and will hit me every time I say I can't draw. xF Don't you love your friends? Anyway, Yes its clinging onto the side of the building NO I don't want it wrapped around. YES Critics and comments allowed.
Redlines approved :} Critic this thing TO DEATH. Tear it up with Red Lines I don't mind! I want to make this piece Aweshomes for her!



by the way, this is on HUGE paper, so Scanning.. Is Out of the Question. {That and out Scanner is Broken. GASP!} So the Camera has to work and I'm doing my best to get good Pictures of .. Pictures XD

Hey it's Armmegedon!

I think its shaping up quite nicely, though the wing does not seem right to me. There seems to be little bone structure and seems a bit rubbery. I've never done a red line before, but if I get the chance, I'll try. Though I can't say how much helped I'd be ^^;

Good luck though on the rest of it, and I'm sure your friend will love it once you've finished.

@ Ginger- Huh?!?!?!?

@Nurmec- Yea I am working still and have actually.. Neglected this piece.... I need to work on more...I will fix the wing ^^ It does seem wierd.

Oh, whoopsy. It's not Ammegedon. It's still cool though.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant by "clinging on to the side of a building" in terms of whether it's using its wings or not.
:S

So I did two redlines -

1) - The wings are basically open here and not holding onto the building

2) - The wings are slightly folded as the claw is clasped onto the building.
(note that you'd have to make sure you drew the membranes overlapping to finish the effect)

I've also drawn a quick line to give a suggestion as to the flow of the spine-to-tail :]

Hope it helps!
Neon's got a very good tutorial on wings if you want a look at that - http://neondragonart.com/dp/tutmenu.html

Ah, thank you very much Gored! I shall works on that <3 The second one is the one that fits better, I needed the dragon basically holding onto the building.