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Yeah, one of my recent tablet works I did. Some explanations, the dragon was inspired by nadar and the terrible terror dragons mixed together. The chicken thing, is puffing up(hence the title) and that's its defence. This was done with a medium Bamboo Fun Tablet.

So, yeah, critz so far?

I'm extremely bored, so I did a quick redline..hope you don't mind.
These are all just suggestions, since I'm not 100% sure what would be completely anatomically correct.
I feel like the snout should be longer, but it doesn't have to be if you prefer it short. The bottom jaw seems a bit too big, in my eyes.
The chest/ribcage seems a tad sharp to me.
The wings can be horizontal, if you like, which would be like (s)he was trying to seem bigger, or about to fly away, I guess. xP
The ankles(mostly the left one) seem a bit thin to me.

I really like the playful mood of this drawing, and both the chicken's and the dragon's expressions.You draw feet so well; I'm jealous. xD Those spikes and the horns...they're just so amazing. The spikes on the tail remind me of rose thorns. ^^
I really can't wait until this is finished and colored(if you are planning on finishing and stuff). :D

I was looking for a more...cartoony style, How to Train Your Dragon, like I said, was this fella's main base. Redlines are welcome, and thankyou very much for them, but I think I'm leaving the body the same way it is.

Oh, okay. Still can't wait to see this finished. ^^ It's such a humorous and cute picture.