elcid1911 Sketch Book

Elcid1911 · **Joined:** June 25th, 2010, 3:37 am **Posts:** 23

Hi there. I've just started to draw recently after an impulse to do so. I wanted to draw dragons so I went to Google and found out about this website and it has been helping me a lot. Here are my very first drawings, I know they have many flaws and for that same reason I need your help to correct them and to improve myself. Please feel free to critique..as long as it helps

I'm sorry for the quality of the drawings, it's because of my scanner (they look a bit better in my desk)

HydraTamer · **Posted:** July 1st, 2010, 8:20 pm

These are very good! :yahoo:

I am no good at anatomy though so don't ask me to tell you want might be wrong with them. The only thing I'm concerned with is your bottom jaws. They seem to be a bit small for the upper jaw. But anywhy you're doing much better than when I first started! lol

Chickys_gone_wild · **Posted:** July 1st, 2010, 9:19 pm

Aye very nice, only problem is you havnt got any facing the right :-[

try doing some facing the right.
these look brilliant and i want to see more

Elcid1911 · **Joined:** June 25th, 2010, 3:37 am **Posts:** 23

Wow thank you both. I am stuggling a bit with the face and the lower jaw..I just can't manage to do them properly. It's easier for me to draw them with their mouths closed rather than opened

Elcid1911 · **Joined:** June 25th, 2010, 3:37 am **Posts:** 23

Here is something new. I've just finished it. Please feel free to critique ( I did this one to the right this time

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HydraTamer · **Posted:** July 2nd, 2010, 10:21 am

Very nice. I'd help you with redlines if I had a tablet, but right now I don't. :-m

Anyways keep up the good work.

Elcid1911 · **Joined:** June 25th, 2010, 3:37 am **Posts:** 23

I'm sorry for my ignorance (I'm new with drawings) but what are the red lines?

Elcid1911 · **Joined:** June 25th, 2010, 3:37 am **Posts:** 23

My most recent and currently my favourite

Lhune · **Posted:** July 2nd, 2010, 1:11 pm

Please reduce the size of the images to 800 pixels in width, otherwise they will stretch the boards.

jwindjackal · **Posted:** July 2nd, 2010, 1:16 pm

Lhune wrote:

Please reduce the size of the images to 800 pixels in width, otherwise they will stretch the boards.

Haha! There is a gaping hole on the side! :o

Okay, now to the art. These are all pretty good, however Dragon number 3 needs a little bit of change. He's rather chubby in the middle section, and everytime I look at him, I picture those scrawny wings failing under his wait and him laying on the ground like Jaba the Hut. In fact, anatomically, I don't think his wings even work no matter what his size. I'll go do some redlines.

Edit: Okay here are some redlines, I've never done redlines before, so they probably look terrible and crappy, but they at least should give you an idea of what to do.

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Edit: Darn! I forgot I was gonna to redlines on its head, oh well, hope I helped at least.

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