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 Post subject: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 1st, 2010, 4:57 pm 
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My friend Synile made a dragon breed a while back named Syneath. And I made a dragon from thus breed. Aiveternia Dycessius. On her maw, and her eyes, they were wired shut. Patches of her flesh were stripped of scale, and sewn back on. Little nodes inside her body and what not.

I am practicing with a new paw type. Because of the viruses implanted into her body, she has a more human like paw. Anyway, I am willing to accepts critiques but I really want help when I finish lineart and begin to color her Via GIMP. If you have any tips I'd be glad to read um. Thanks for the help (:

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 2nd, 2010, 7:30 am 
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Love the claws. :amused:

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 2nd, 2010, 9:53 am 
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Wow, it looks wonderful ^^ There is just one thing that is bothering me...I don't understand how the back legs are suppose to be Oo


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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 2nd, 2010, 12:03 pm 
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Cullen- Thank you ^^ I do to. I based them off the human hand.

Akerah- Yea I know I gotta fix that >.< A friend has helped show me a more... Eh.. Well they helped me fixed it x}

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 2nd, 2010, 7:03 pm 
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I really love this, but is it just me or are the wings located in an improper place on the body?

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 11th, 2010, 6:14 pm 
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Yea I've worked on it a bit ^^ TADA!


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I'm actually enjoying this. Tis so much fun. x}

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 14th, 2010, 8:07 pm 
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Got more done about.. a night ago or so.. Maybe two.. I don't know. ^^

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Bonding time is so much fun.

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 16th, 2010, 11:49 pm 
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I swear Sangyne, you come up with the most unique names!

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 17th, 2010, 10:08 am 
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I like how you draw the heads of the dragons! ^^ They look cool!

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 Post subject: Re: Aiveternia Dycessius
PostPosted: July 17th, 2010, 10:18 am 
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Gingerleaf- So I'm told ^^ I recently made a newer OC, Anevanvyde Sianyde and her rider is Isoven Makonov.

HydraTamer- Thanks ^^ I prefer making them more smoother and of few arches for the females while males have a more compact and angular head.

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