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 Post subject: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 5th, 2010, 9:45 pm 
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I no longer wish to have this story on the web. Ain't satisfied, and hardly anyone read it, so you won't miss it.

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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 6th, 2010, 2:25 am 
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This was very interesting, can't wait to here more! You've got some splaining to do though, who are these imperials? What in the hell is a hulder? Why was the boy named after cabbage :O. ? Haha, guess I'll have to keep reading to find out right?


Also, there are a few errors, but I really don't feel like pointing them all out right now, maybe later.

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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 6th, 2010, 3:35 am 
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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 6th, 2010, 12:00 pm 
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Haha very interesting, can't wait for the next chapter ! (Or whatever it is these sections are called.)

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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 6th, 2010, 2:50 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 6th, 2010, 7:20 pm 
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Oh my.....whats gonna happen next? O.O

P.S. How many more parts is this?

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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
PostPosted: July 8th, 2010, 2:54 am 
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Uh-oh O.O

Next part please! :D

oh and when you put a : and then a j when something was talking it turned it into a smiley.

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 Post subject: Re: This Ol' Sorcery
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