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I dont really agree with some of the parts of the redlines, but i did some Brownlines for you.
I hope this helps place things better.
His legs look like to round, like a chubby dragon, not a muscely dragon
I focused mainly on the Shoulder,Feet,legs area.Also wing bones can be diffrent lenghts. Middle one might be longest, or shortest. its good to mix it up a bit and trail into something new

Ok. I would of changed the legs a least if I hadn't inked it already. But the lines should help future projects. And I noticed the front legs are at a slant when I posted it. Now I'm wishing I hadn't of inked it... *sigh* Oh well.

Ok, update! I've never done little lizards before so I could use a bit of help on them. Their legs look a bit weird, and the one lizard, that is looking at the dragon, could use some work. Other than that feel free to comment on anything.

If you havnt done lizards use a refrance.
Here are some pics of New Zealand Skinks, and the Tuatara
http://naturescrusaders.files.wordpress ... 9cde_o.jpg
http://img.metro.co.uk/i/pix/2008/10/tu ... 50x300.jpg
http://www.google.co.nz/imgres?imgurl=h ... s%3Disch:1
That Website has some infromation
http://www.doc.govt.nz/conservation/nat ... go-skinks/
And thats NZs DOC (Department of Conservation)
this has lots of Helpful images XD

All right, thanks. But I was going for a two legged lizard. And something that would be in a pack (herd, flock, ect...).

There isn't a two legged lizard, as such - they all have 4 legs, some stand on two, but the shorter legs are not classed as arms

I think you're illustrating something from the Dromaeosauridae biological family (ex: velociraptors). They're more closely related to modern-day birds than to modern-day lizards. I agree with biddlyboobaa too; there aren't any bipedal lizards alive today. The only lizard species I can think of which is believed to have been bipedal is the long-extinct Eudibamus. They went extinct before the dinosaurs were around.

Ah. Yes, I guess they wouldn't be alive today. I guess I'm going more toward dinos. Something like the little tiny ones :p. Actually I think my brother has a book with pictures of dinos. I think I'll look at that. Or if I can't find them, I'll make them mammals or something.

Ok, another update! The lizards that were running were replaced with that other lizard dino thing. I found it in my brother's dinosaur book. But the lizard looking at the dragon I'm keeping. Let's just say it's my new lizard species!

They're in a desert next to an oasis, with another one in the backround. C&C are welcome!

Oasis