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 Post subject: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 3:06 am 
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Hi, for now I just want to upload one picture, but I may change my mind! Please let me know what you think of it, pointers are welcome :amused:
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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 8:54 am 
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lol Freaky is the first thing that comes to mind. XD It's really good! I think you drew it all very well!

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 16th, 2011, 1:23 pm 
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Haha freaky indeed XD thanks :amused:


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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 28th, 2011, 11:39 am 
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How positively nightmare-ish. I love it.

Your perspective is a little off once you get further back towards the tent (it is a tent, right?) but with persepctive one expects you to get it perfect, especially when it is so far in the background. -That is unless you were my old art teacher, who expected 11yr olds to be able to draw a scaled and shaded lion from a real life study to perfection-
Anyway; The anatomy of the face could do with some work, unless that is your style.
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What I find most enthralling, is the way the shadow creatures on the left look like they are beckoning the child to open the door, while the one on the right looks like it is trying to warn him of the dangers. Is this an on going theme/comic? or just a random piece?

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 28th, 2011, 12:34 pm 
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Heh yeah, I'm not really sure where the door goes... so I guess that's why the perspective's dodgy. This is just a random thingy, but I might extend it, not really sure.

Thanks for your opinion ^-^

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 28th, 2011, 4:12 pm 
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Looks great :D
I like the stylisation and overall composition/perspective. His right (our right) eye bothers me a bit though, when only the eyes port is blackened it seems like the eye is entirely missing so unless that was what you were going for it might be good to darken the entire right side of his face ^^

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: June 29th, 2011, 1:12 pm 
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Haha thanks ^-^ yeah his eye IS missing :weird: I guess I need to work on making things like that obvious ^^;

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: July 5th, 2011, 12:14 pm 
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Dragon-lass77 wrote:
Your perspective is a little off once you get further back towards the tent (it is a tent, right?) but with persepctive one expects you to get it perfect, especially when it is so far in the background.


I personally like the surreal perspective. Except, perhaps, that the house seems to be facing the wrong way.


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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: July 6th, 2011, 11:33 am 
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This is great...its kind of scary but at the same time it makes me smile haha.
I really like your shading too, bay the way. And I love the little shadow monster things xD

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 Post subject: Re: My Drawings :)
PostPosted: July 17th, 2011, 5:43 am 
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Thanks for the feedback, guys :)
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