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That's one interesting race you've got there^^

Me likes her outfit and head and staff and necklace, but as ACE said, the feet look a bit... squishy and awkward, like they're standing not on their toes, but on their toenails. And they seem a tad too small for such a body too. My tablet isn't working, so I can't make any redlines, though. But you've got an interesting concept there!

Thanks guuuuysl and I see what you mean about the feet. I just need to place the heel firmly on the ground; they ended up being kinda levitated there. xD

And here's another; a delightful study of delightfully complicated hands. Hooray!

Now put the complicated hands into complicated poses and perspectives! Not much to critique, seeing as these are just sketches. Are you going to draw the muscles next? Or the nervous/cardiovascular system? Also lol at your handwriting, it's sloppy like mine.

haha, I think I've something for you ;) http://fcmx.net/vec/v.php?i=003702 It's about drawing humans and bones

Thanks, guys! And, armed with this basic knowledge, putting the hands in to complicated poses shouldn't be too difficult. Just gotta simplify! :D

And I'm working on muscles; but hands will probably come way later. I'm working my way from the head down.

And my handwriting isn't sloppy; it's abstract art. Clearly you simply aren't sophisticated enough to interpret the depths of its hidden meanings. *Floozy*



Aaand two more! Finally finished the skeleton, moving on to muscles! 8D





As always, CnC Welcome.

mmmm....sexy

Sexy indeed. Nothing's quite as good a turn-on as some nice facial muscle structure, eh?

And another!

Just a quick speedpainting I did for my artslam. It's not that great; I was away like all day and didn't get a chance to do anything decent. xD


Larger on dA

So it's sketchy and messy and badly composed.... I like the colors, though.

So, yeah. I'll try to be less epic fail with future entries. xD

'not that great'

What?! If I did something like that - which would be impossible - I'd be over the moon with it. The atmosphere it instills is really dramatic.

So be over the moon with it!

Love the sky

Hehe, thanks very much, guys. >w<


And yet more laziness; playing around with motion blurring and stuff like that. It's *supposed* to be a giant laser striking a huge forest; but everything's so messy and undefined it looks more like.... like...... blobs of nothing. xD

Oh, well. Didn't have much time to work today, so this is all I got. xD