Sketches inna bun!

Stormwing · **Posted:** August 30th, 2009, 12:53 am

I need some redlines on this piece, both for dragon anatomy and composition. I thought of placing the mountains and parts of the standing dragon in the shadow and make a reddish-brown color scheme. And perhaps make the dragons black and white. But redlines are much needed and wanted!

Stormwing · **Posted:** September 3rd, 2009, 2:08 pm

That's 'sergeant' for you, kid

Paigedog · **Posted:** September 3rd, 2009, 4:13 pm

funny

Stormwing · **Posted:** September 4th, 2009, 2:27 pm

Thanks, Paige^^

Reynardine

Paigedog · **Posted:** September 4th, 2009, 4:11 pm

ur welcome

Lhune · **Posted:** September 5th, 2009, 3:12 am

Reynardine looks a bit too.. Poofy for an actual fox. This may have been your intention, but their coat is generally very smooth as you can see here.

Other than that it's pretty cute though

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Stormwing · **Posted:** September 5th, 2009, 11:16 am

O Lhune, your critique is always most welcome! Well, thanks! I went kinda wild with the fur, and, well, my reference was a bit fuzzy too, but yeah, very overdone. I'll give him a smoother coat next time I draw him. Thanks for telling me!

Stormwing · **Posted:** September 7th, 2009, 11:42 am

No. 5, Leavin' the Party

Flute · **Posted:** September 7th, 2009, 11:45 am

He looks awesome :3 The extra legs have been put in there well, and don't look out of place :3 The pose is also very nice, and adds to the characters design ^^

Mith the Myth · **Joined:** August 17th, 2009, 4:09 pm **Posts:** 123

He looks like he's sneaking away. :wiii:

Very nice job!!

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